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Looking for Nirvana...Kept painfully stitching that fake smile on your face, day after godforsaken dayUntil you broke down. Shaking. TremblingRight down to your inner being. ATicking time bomb of devastating self-destruction. YouCouldn'tObtain whatever it was you were looking for. Helpless. Lost.But for a moment, you forgot that you weren't GodAnd it made all the difference that YOU chose when to go.I want to be so furious but I could never. You were only trying to findNirvana.